Paragraf Bahasa Inggris 3

¹Both of the author and the lecturor discuss about the same sociological study. ²The study about online education. ³The author takes the positive point of view. ⁴One of his points, he citing that in study statistics shows that high percent of students think online course very affective. ⁵The lecturor concentrates in negative point. ⁶He says even though students think affective, a higher percent of students in online course dropping out of class before finish then in “face-to-face” (f2f) class.⁷He says students in online classes don’t like study alone and feel isolation. ⁸But author says maybe changes in technology in future will solve some of todays problems with online classes. ⁹I agree that there are more advantages to “f2f” classes and I would rather take this kind of class.

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Kalimat 1: Both of the author and the lecturor discuss about the same sociological study.

Masalah:

Both of the author and the lecturor seharusnya  Both  the author and the lecturer (both selalu berpasangan dengan and dan salah dalam pemilihan kata lecturor)

Kalimat 2: The study about online education.

Masalah:

The study about online education seharusnya The study is about online education (agar menjadi kalimat harus ada to be)

Kalimat 3: The author takes the positive point of view.

 

Masalah: nil (nihil)

Kalimat 4: One of his points, he citing that in study statistics shows that high percent of students think online course very affective.

Masalah:

he citing seharusnya he cites (salah dalam penggunaan verba)

in study statistics seharusnya in statistics study (tatanan kata terbalik)

high percent of students think seharusnya a high percent of students thinks (kurang artikel dan verbanya disesuaikan)

very affective seharusnya very effective (salah dalam pemilihan kata)

Kalimat 5: The lecturor concentrates in negative point.

Masalah:

The lecturor seharusnya The lecturer  (salah dalam pemilihan kata)

concentrates in seharusnya concentrates on (salah dalam pemakaian preposisi)

Kalimat 6: He says even though students think affective, a higher percent of students in online course dropping out of class before finish then in “face-to-face” (f2f) class.

Masalah:

students think affective seharusnya students think it effective (perlu kehadiran obyek dan salah dalam pemilihan kata)

dropping out of class seharusnya drops out of class (salah dalam penggunaan verba)

before finish seharusnya before they finish (perlu kehadiran subyek)

then in “face-to-face” (f2f) class seharusnya than in “face-to-face” (f2f) class (salah dalam pemilihan kata)

Kalimat 7: He says students in online classes don’t like study alone and feel isolation.

Masalah:

don’t like study alone seharusnya don’t like to study alone (setelah verba “like” diikuti bentuk gerund atau infinitif)

and feel isolation seharusnya and feel isolated (linking verb “feel” diikuti adjektiva)

Kalimat 8: But author says maybe changes in technology in future will solve some of todays problems with online classes.

Masalah:

in future seharusnya in the future (bentuk nomina diperlukan)

todays problems seharusnya today problems (sebagai adjektiva tanpa “s”)

Kalimat 9: I agree that there are more advantages to “f2f” classes and I would rather take this kind of class.

Masalah: nil (nihil)

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Paragraf Bahasa Inggris 3

¹Both the author and the lecturer discuss about the same sociological study. ²The study is about online education. ³The author takes the positive point of view. ⁴One of his points, he cites that in statistics study shows that a high percent of students thinks online course very effective. ⁵The lecturer concentrates on negative point. ⁶He says even though students think it effective, a higher percent of students in online course drops out of class before they finish than in “face-to-face” (f2f) class.⁷He says students in online classes don’t like to study alone and feel isolated. ⁸But author says maybe changes in technology in the future will solve some of today problems with online classes. ⁹I agree that there are more advantages to “f2f” classes and I would rather take this kind of class.